The girls were stunning, but her smile.
Her smile.
There was intent. And stars in the sky.
The whisky was potent, but her eyes.
Her eyes.
There was depth. And a pool to jump into.
The dress was brave, but her innocence.
Her innocence.
There was a man. And a worthy one at that.
The absence of chance, but hope.
Hope.
There was a sign. And an idea that wanted to try.
The desire to love again, but fear.
Fear.
Rantravereflect added:
There was a connection. And a magic potion that emptied itself into us.
The frenzied bloodiness gushing, but her misplaced sanity.
Sanity.
There was the unison. And fire and fiery passion.
The love was impreganble, but so was her betrayal.
Betrayal.
There used to be another man. And maybe he was worthier than me.
The earth shook a little, but her stablity.
Stability.
There was a wedding. And beautiful bridesmaids and confetti.
The look of nervousness, but her faith.
Faith.
38 comments:
So you alive?
Darr ke aage jeet hai! :D
This looks good. More like yourself. Not lame like your last post.
This is so Beautiful..
beautiful :)
Wow!!:)
R
Beautiful, I think I was there. Was I ?
As someone who has neither hope nor chance (nowhere in sight at least!), I'd say scrap the fear :)
As someone who has neither hope nor chance (nowhere in sight at least!), I'd say scrap the fear :)
Ok, I have no idea why my comments get posted twice on your blog. But I came back to urge you not to disappear on us lesser mortals again.
@Rohin: You have always been there.
@A Shade of Blue: Pinky swear.
:)
good to know you can love again.
And... at last... after a long long sabbatical... he is back. Well done, you :)
well well. look who's back. where you been fool?
ANOTHER GIRL!
WOW!
:) Me likes...
YAY! HE'S BACK! EVERYTHING'S RIGHT WITH THE WORLD AGAIN!!!!
I hope this is for P and not anyone else. Good job buddy - you're back with a bang!
Why "3"?
Have you read "2" and "1"?
Hmmm..spring is in the air...
The canvas that you paint has colours of red, blue and grey...dab it with shades of violet and green...
say... I remember reading a post where you were ticked off for some reason. where'd that go?
I removed it.
Hope, Desire
Love, Fear
Life!
There was a connection. And a magic potion that emptied itself into us.
The frenzied bloodiness gushing, but her misplaced sanity.
Sanity.
There was the unison. And fire and fiery passion.
The love was impreganble, but so was her betrayal.
Betrayal.
There used to be another man. And maybe he was worthier than me.
The earth shook a little, but her stablity.
Stability.
There was a wedding. And beautiful bridesmaids and confetti.
The look of nervousness, but her faith.
Faith.
:)
@Rantravereflect: Is there such a thing as a 'Wow' smiley? :)
Have been reading your blog for a while..awesome thoughts ..keeps me coming back for more:) keep up the writing
Very beautiful.
@Anonymous: Will do. Thanks.
@Swetha: Please also thank RRR.
Revisting after a long time...and as usual...love what I see :)
Where u at?
@Nemesis: Still where you left us. Are you back in Delhi?
yep...been back a year now...work across the road from u...shud meet sometime
Done. Call me. My number's still the same.
don't have it no more...changed no's so many times...u call me..9871033958
Will do love.
bravo TS :-)
good to read ur articles again!
Good to read yours too my friend! :)
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